Remake of an RPG about made up animals

3 hours after the seron tried to confront Jake I decided to ask Jake some thing.
I went in and found jake asleep so asked a guard if I should let him keep sleeping or if I should wake him.

((max))

I was sleeping by my father when i heard the other seron come in. I opend my eyes and looked at him.

Hi. I said only to the one who opened his eyes.

((max is a hatchling..))




((max))

what are you doing in here? we are trying to sleep. I did not like being woken up from my nap.

9(max))


I sighed. guess i am awake now.

But I'd let Jake sleep. I said.

((max))

I know.. do you know where megan is?

I think she was playing by the cliff on the far side of camp. I said.

((max))

I ran off to find my sister. it didin't take me long to find her. we played for a while, But being hatchlings we did not realize the danger we were in being so far away from the fighters and found ourselves straying further and further away from the main part of the pack. soon they were a good distance away and at that time something grabbed us from behind. we struggled but could not get free.


((jake))

I woke up a few hours later to find max had left the cave. I went out and did my normal routine. it was then that i realized I did not see any sign of either of my hatchlings. at first I wasent too worried since they often hid from me and were very good at it too. but after a few hours of searching they were nowhere to be found. I walked over to lydiaa. did you happen to see my hatchlings recently? I asked her.

before I answerd her. some humans walked into the camp. "some black serons sold us your hatchlings. we are here to show you what we plan to do with them" one said. others stepped out they had my hatchlings in a strong cage. without warning one of them shoved a knife thorugh the opening stabbing max, who squealed then showed his teeth at the man. I wil make this simple for you I said. you can realease them, and I will let you go. or I can have my fighters attack, kill lot of you and then release them myself. either wy I'm takeing my hatchlings back my voice was calm but the tone still was ice cold.

While the two were conversing I snuck up behind them and knocked them over,l pinning down the one carrying the knife

what will it be? fighters had gatherd behind me.

[i]He's already surrendured his choice by a) participating in the illegal trade and b) rubbing it in your face. He has also tresswpasesd,

I kept the human pinned down and left the execution of orders to the others.

when the humans were taken care of. we broke open the cage and max and megan jumped out

Are you two alright? Anything broken?

The hatchlings didn't answer. they were shivering, clearly scared into silence by the exsperiance.

I spoke soothingly to them as best I could. Perhaps they schould go stay with my brother and sister awhile, if anybody else roughly their age understands traumatised, it would be them.

true, true. I thought for a moment. Could we maybe as if Caleb could be the one to get them there? He probably knows a better way there,
Caleb had been one of Eyris's confidants and advisors. He was my age, and always willing to help.