Remake of an RPG about made up animals

((Only a little! l I am out of ideas...))

((I have an idea. but i can;t use it untill after they have gotten away))


I knew we were entering another packs territory. the black serons would not want to follow us there. the other packs wouldent hurt us. but they would attack the black serons. and their fighters were fresh.

My adrenaline rush was starting to fade. I was breathing hard, and I was beginning to feel sluggish.

that set off an internal spark, probably like he wanted. but i couldn't control my anger any longer, oh, so i have no clue what i am doing do i? i sprang my first attack mid scentance

when we hit the boarder the black serons turned and left. and we relaxed. some gold serons even fell over from exsaughstion.

I was amazed at how i could actilly think in a fight, i'd never had that before

the pack is safe, shall i come get you out of there? I said to lydiaa.

some help might b- i cut off as i doged

I'll be right there I said. and took off.

after so long began to noice flaws in my brother's fighting strategies,

I made my entrance by shooting some beams at kronar. ((a leaders magical attacks wont hurt his own pack members. or his allies)) you have a poor stradigy. I said to kronar with mock disapproval.

as my brother looked at the new addition to the figh i leaped and bit down on the back of his neck. it wouldn't do as much damage is i;d likie but it'd be something

you fool, I will kill you both! kronar said. and last time you fought both of us. we broke your wings I said. dodgeing one of his attacks.

a misterious glint caught in my eye as i had an idea

you think of soemthing? I said only to lydiaa.

it might work...

he is flawed in his defense while he attacks right to left, leaving the right underside open in the later swing

i jumped and rolled to the side,

kronar turned to attack. and I dove at his exsposed underside. digging my claws in as deep as i could.