Remake of an RPG about made up animals

don't let any of them through I said. The gold seron fighters did not let any gaps open in the formation. loners were often amazed at how well trained the pack fighters were. they could move into formation faster then any human army. But the black serons were also serons. and their fighters had formed their own formation to try and break through ours.

I was starting to get a little frustrated. 'Don't they EVER give up??' I thought. A black seron tried to creep up on me, but I growled at him and he backed off. Not, I knew, because he was scared. He was waiting for me to let my guard down.

start getting the hatchlings to saftey. we canpt hold them back much longer I sent to order out.

(Sorry, i've been totally zoned out of this one. Good to know there are three of us again. )
i On it I called, hastily returning. I'd taken some action in the direction of keeping the rest of the pack calm and, in a way, evactuating the immediate area. I made breif eye contact with Cora, and winked. If Cora is working on pure potential, she's likley to be better than i am. one day. I addressed jake

we just had to keep them back long enough for the non fighters to escape. maybe, if she learns to work with other fighters I said to lydiaa.

(Yay! Now we aren't the only ones trying to come up with ideas!)
I wasn't sure what I was doing, keeping an eye on the black serons I asked, Should I help with the hatchlings, or stay here?
(lol Had to prove his point somehow.)

Right I replied. One of the black serons tested my guard, but I bit at him. 'Please get those hatchlings out fast!' I thought.
(Running out of ideas fast...)

I sensed kronar was close. lkronar is comeing I warned everyone. i'd like to be out of here before he arrives, but if we are not so lucky do not try to fight him directly. I had personaly fought kronar. the black seron leader was vey powerful. and I had hoped he would not come to this battle.

((maybe kronar can also be the leader of the black serons who wiped out coras pack. and when he shows up (becuase he will) she recognises him ))

((That works. She recognizes his voice more than anything, She never really saw him.))
Something about that name gave me chills. Jake had mentioned it before, when he first saw me. Why did his name make me feel so cold?

I had a cold feeling. but I did not let it show. I would fight him myself if I had to.

((o.k. I am drawing a blank now...))
I kept trying to keep the black serons back. It was getting very annoying. I wished they would just go away!

my gut dropped when I saw kronar fly out of the clouds. but in the next instant I got a ghold of myself and face him. showing my teeth in defiacne.

I saw a seron diving down at us, and from every ones reaction to him I guessed he was Kronar. Something about him was familiar....

don't break the line I snapped the order. the took off straight at kronar. my scales glowing. I knew he would kill me. but I ahd to hold him off.

((He needs to talk for Cora to really recognize him.))

I will finesh my job this time kornar said. I wont make it easy I said.

I gasped. My whole body felt cold. I was frozen on place. I remembered. I remembered everything from that day. I was young, I wasn't sure how young, just young. My mother was scared. she threw me into a small crevice in the rock, and told me not to move, or make a sound no matter what I heard. I was scared. I heard fighting, and then that voice. Telling my pack that they would be destroyed once and for all. more fighting. And then, silence, a long long silence. That silence lasted until today. I talked, so I would remember myself, but there was never any one around, except the animals. Until now. And I was determined not to let this pack die! all these thoughts were over in a manner of seconds. But it was long enough. One of the black serons tried to get through past me. I came to, and snapped at him, I felt his skin tear under my teeth, and he backed off.

kronar and I fought for hours. I was determined to not let him wipe out my pack, not after all I had done for them. I shot severla beams at kronar. two o them struck him in the side. he sent some of his own and I barely avoided them. you fool you cannot beat me kronar hissed. I know the loner who has joined you. her father fought me for quite some time before I killed him. he was a pack leader too. I showed my teeth. you wont do that to us I said. I will make sure of it.

I heard him, and gritted my teeth. He was aiming that as much at me as Jake, and I knew it. I did my best to ignore him. Even if I did die, I was not dieing knowing I had given up! I would fight to my last breath.

come on cora, help your new freind kronar said. i'd like to kill both of you. my own response was to shoot an energy ball at him.

I kept my eyes on the enemy. Don't look, I told myself. Just don't! He was trying to get into my head, and I really didn't like it, But he could probably do worse if I looked. Who knew what kind of powers he had.

your battle is with me I growled at him. since when do you insult my fighters?

One of the black seron fighters was laughing at me. [i]You are weak.[/i] He growled. [i]At least I don't fallow blindly![/i] Which threw him off, then I killed him.

((nathan (one of the golds serons elite fighters) ))


yeah, and what have they been doing? kronar has got to be the cruelst leader I have ever seen. and I have seen several pack eladers in my time. following jake around.