an RPG about made up animals.

"zack will be fine, we have very good healers" I said. she couldent hide her true feelings from me.




((zack))

I was starting to wake up. the first thing I noticed as a sharp pain in my side. I tried to get up. But it hurt so much I fell back down whimpering.



((jake))

I walked over to zack as soon as I saw him move. "don't try to move, you were hurt pretty bad" I said. zack sighed and relaxed a little.






((ok.. I'm going to be leaveing in a couple hours, and I will not be back untill satarday. so if you need jake's POV and I am notback yet. just go ahead and do it. same goes for zack and danial (for those who don't know, danial is a human child the gold serons rescued from feraks) ))

((ok, everyone. I am back. I have also added a bit to my last post. so be sure to look at that))

((wat did u change? i see nothing))

((I just added a bit, it's above the part that talks about me leaveing))

((oh the thing with jake? i thought that was already there))

((it wasent, I added that when I jsut barely came back))

((oh...wel i hav nothing))

((great. I wait for a week. and all I get is that you have nothing?!!))

((yes. that is exactly wat u get))

((grr fine.. we need anabella))

((annabelle has been on but she never posts in anything))

((which is what frustrates me. I have considerd giveing away her charactor several times. just so that adele can do something))


EDIT: ((ok, I am going to add something. ))


((zack))

I wasent only in pain. I was confused. I had no idea what was going on. all i knew was that I could not move. and there was someone near me. that someone touched me. and I bit them. someone said something to me, but it sounded like giberish. they touch me again. so I bit them again.



((jake))

zack obviously had no idea where he was or what was going on at the moment. he bit me every time I tried to help him. I could see nothing but confuson and fear in his eyes. adele, you are good at calming down hatchlings, how about you try talking to him? I said to adele

((I'm so sorry I haven't posted anything. Its just for 1 I'm too lazy to go back and read what I have missed and two whenever I try to post something I have been given some cleaning assignment by my mother or I have to leave for other things. So i promise I will post more often))

I nodded. Zach, love, its mommy. Can you hear me? I asked. It seemed he could but couldn't respond. I looked at Jake concerned.

((zelf made a new one so that the lost members can go to that one...its the exact same thing so i guess we have 2 of the same, but i'm not gonna go to that one...))

((I am not going to be doing this one anymore. those who are in this one should go to the new one, the new one is still about serons but the story is diffrent))

ok, the last posting was on July 12.. does this one really need to stay on the main board?

I would think it can be moved to the archives because there is another topic like this one anyways. But if you are against that, just post a little note telling me not to move it.

move it to the archives.