an RPG about made up animals.

zack woke up when I walked in, he sat up and looked at me. how long will I have to be like this? he said. two more weeks I told him. if you do as the healers tell you zack sighed. I know.. but i still don't like it he said.







EDIT: ((going to update everyone on whats going on. This is mostly for people who are lost))


ok, So everyone is back home now. Zack is currently recovering from being attacked by something and he is hateing recovery. ((he keeps trying to get his parents to let him go play)) on top of that the gold serons are running very low on food, which is causing them to be too weak to defend themselves. so they asked for help from the other packs. all the packs except for the red serons decided to help out. so they are all at the gold serons camp to help with heir defenses. also gale ((babiebunnies charactor)) isin't too happy about the blue serons being here, becuase her parents are in that pack and she doesn't like them.



well, Thats our update!

((u'll find out soon about gale and her parents, blah blah blah))

((umm. ok))


The serons from other packs werent that bad. They got along with my fighters well enough. But there were a few isues. hunger was keeping the weakend gold serons hatchlings from playing with the healthier hatchlings from other packs.

AFter my mother, my dad came over. We went to a bench to talk.
"You should be respectful towards you're mother."
"Not if she can't be respectful around Trace."
There was silence.
"You're...you're mom had a difficult time handling that situation. Even you didn't talk to Trace for awhile. I understood why he did it, but you're mom can't handle the fact that Trace killed her son."
"It's not like he wanted to! Cam was going to kill him! He turned on us. How can she not see that?!"
I walked away leaving my dad on that ruddy bench.

a few days later, zack had recoverd enough to play with the other hatchlings. he was veyr happy about that. but like the other gold seron hatchlings, lack of popor nurshment left him very weakend. thanks to the other pack leaders, we had enough strong fighters to fight off most enemies. now our worst foes was starvation.


Things did not get better, I was doing the normal duties that my position reuquired. when one of my fighters came running to me, he didin't give me time to ask him what he wanted. it's yout daughter! shes gone missing! he said. at first I wasent too concerns, ashley always was good at hideing. are you sure? I said. yes the fighter said. there is a fresh scent of feraks in the camp now I was concernd.I thought they all died off when krehogar was kille I said. we must find her. feraks are not freindly captors.


((feraks were once serons. but they became too evil to become black seorns. so they became something totaly diffrent. they desire nothing more then to cause suffering.))


((oh, and serons survive to protect. it is their greatest pleasure to protect the innocent. But sometimes, like now. they have to protect themselves. and they enjoy the welfare of their hatchlings more then protecting innocents))

((and whos krehogar?))

((former leader of the feraks. every seron has heard stories about him. and some of the older ones have seen him, and have fought his feraks before, and they have fought them under the command of jason, the leader before marcus who was the leader before jake.))

((ok so supposedly krehogar died or did he really die?))

((krehogar was killed be marcus, his son now leads the feraks))

((um ok))

((Trace))

I flew over to the gold camp as soon as I heard that feraks might be coming. Is it true Jake? There are feraks still alive?

yes, they kidnapped my daughter I said. I was in too much of a hurry to talk for long. I walked past him with ten elite fightets following me, one of them was isala,

((Isala))

Should we form a defense line? Or go out for Ashley right now?

both I said. if these feraks are like they were in the past, they will attack here while we are rescueing ashley. we will leave some fighters here to protect the camp. while others lead the rescue attmepted.

good idea I said. lola will come with me. tell the gold seron fighters you are in charge untill we get back. answer only to the white leader.

I watched as they flew away. I gathered all the fighters and we made a line around the camps. I told all the other pack's leaders that feraks were going to attack. They were a little surprised at first but obeyed. Now every camp was surrounded by fighters except the red pack's.

((oh, the red serons will regret that.))

((zack))

I was worried about my sister. I hoped the fighters could find her. I paced restlessly. I couldent relax when I knew the feraks had her. I had heard stories about how they treated prisoners. they they were twice as bad as the jbaerwockys! I was glad my father put isala in charge. he was my favorite elite fighter. ((being the leaders personal gaurds. the elite probley know his family very well too)) most of the others were kind of stuck up. I climbed onto the rock that isala stood on now. I may not be able to fly yet. but I was good at climbing. I tired to see over the forest, but I did not have the super good eyesight of adult serons yet. so i couldent see nearly was much as isala probley saw. do you see my father out there? I asked him.

Yes. They are heading out towards what we believe is the feraks hideout. Don't worry Zack. They'll be fine, and so will your sister.Suddenly there was huge crash. We hurried back to see what it was. The feraks had attacked. Go to your mother and hide! Go!

((zack))

I didin't waste any time. I ran and hid with my mother, and the other hatchlings. I knew adele well enough to know she could take on any singal ferak that got past the fighters. But what if more got past them?

((Isala))

I was surprised at the numbers of feraks there were. We thought all of them were dead, yet so many were attacking. I hoped the other packs were holding them off well. I ran to a hatchling. A ferak was eyeing it. Why weren't you hiding out of danger? The hatchling just trembled. GO to Adele! And it ran off.

((kyle))

woah that is a lot of feraks I said. braceing myself to meet them. The fighters under my command did the same.

I was surprised how many feraks were here. I almost felt like fleeing, but that wasn't in my nature. Trace was next to me, and that was a big confidence booster. I lunged to confront 3 feraks. I slashed one in the face, trying to claw out its eyes. I jumped ontop of another and bit down hard. Blood started to gush out. The other was just way too easy. It was obvious it wasn't a real fighter.

it ws not easy to find the feraks hideout. But we did eventuly. we curcled high above. trying to find the best place to strike,



((kyle))

I had never fought so hard in my life. if there were no hatchlings in danger I would have fled. I wonder if the caretaker has any knowledge of this I said.

((the serons live on a perserve, they are strong enough to overthrow the treaty, But they don't want to. the caretaker does not know how powerfull they really are, they have not told him anything about their true power))

Name: Sereda
Age: unknown
Rank: outcast
Pack: unknown
Description: She turned grey in color after she was cast out
Personality: timid once she knows you, great fighter, does her duty
((Is this okay zelf?))

((yeah))


we finaly found a way into the feraks camp. I had my fighters split up ((jake is very good a stradigy. but he has never seen this place before. )) I was leading the fource that would attack head on. our job was to just fight random feraks and keep them dstracted. the other gorup would come in from the back and search for ashley. and sometimes help fight.