Remake of an RPG about made up animals

((i'll explain later unless melody wnats to))

((but I want to start my carictor now! you know i have no patians.....wow horrible spelling))

((fine. jake is just baout loseing it woth the fighters and max and meagan are takeing refuge in the multicolord camp becaus eit is too dangouras for them))

(does that make her Marisol's Mom? Mellories grandma? James' great g'ma...)

((what? what is the family tree here?))

((marisol is the grand daughter of the current white leader. so our charactor would be her mother. ))

((oh I am just a hatching...lets say I am adopted cuz the black serons killed my mom and dad and the leader wanted to have a hatching agen so he volunteered to take care of me as his own))

(We have like 4 generations goiong on in roleplays right now so, )

((and?))

((wait.. maybe you should be someone els rube. your charactor dies. marisol is the leader in one of the later roleplays))

rely? darn...then I will be the gold seron leaders hatch ling

(I have so/too many characters in the other ones, you could probabl take over some of them. Like maybe DeAnna in this one, Kristi in the next...)

((jake already has two hatchlings. so she wouldent be his only child. ))

ok then I will be the silver leaders hatching and...my mother was a gold seron

((so you are a half breed. like kyle and mellorie. that will work))

((ok so lets start)) rube,"oh daddy can we go now please please please please?!?!?" "ok" yeppy!' we had no idea what was going on with the other packs but today was the best day of my life I was to learn how to fly the excitement was just so accelerating! I could not wait! 'come on"he said jump on my back and I will bring you to the rock were you will learn to fly along with the other hatchlings" we were flying to the rock I could not wait! "daddy I want to fly now " "no but soon you will" it seamed like ages to get there, but we maid it 'ok now everyone spread out your wings" ok did that all the time to pretend to fly "now feal the wind..let it imbrase you then jump you will have an undesirable feeling as if you could just fly to the moon so I did just that and just as my dad said I was flying with the wind but I looked down and my friends just fell to the ground.."we all don't get it the first time try agen good job rube you have a talent for flying 'thank you daddy" I loved to feal the wind in my face as it went to my scales I could feal a tingling sensation the Vally looked beautiful then I started to do loops and twists it was truly the best thing I had ever done and the best thing I would ever do I loved it then it was interrupted by my father "come back you are going to far!" "ok daddy" so I flew back and just as I laded it felt like I was in 0 gravity I could not feal my weight for a bit "how was it?" "AMAZING!" can I fly home? you will have to wait for the class to end I need to come with you "ok"

I noticed the silver leader was teaching his packs hatchlings to fly nearby. usualy i did not mind. But they did not know that the gold serons were at war and that it was not a good idea to take a bunch of hatchlings out in the open. I saw his daughter among them. if i rememberd correctly her mother was one of my fighters.

"daddy is it time to go home yet?" "ok ok class is over I will bring you all home for those who can not fly hop on my back for those who do I will keep a close eye on in your flight and catch you if you fall" "ok" said all of the hatchlings, now off we go I was watching the Vally below and saw a bunch of golden and black in one spot "daddy what is that?" "looks like a war....I will be gone for a feue weaks lets get you home then I will go " "why daddy?" "its a war I must help them" "ok I will miss you daddy"

((the gold serons arent fighting right now. a war is a bunch of battles over a period of time. not just one battle. this is a time between battles. right now jake is trying to get ready to defend against the next attack. and make sure we know who is saying what in your posts. ))

((joining! is this after the role play that I am in? or before?))

((which one are you in?))

((you know witch one were I am rube the silver serons hatchilng))

((this is the same one))

((oops))

((yeah.... ))