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What Time I Have Left

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Post by Miara Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:20 pm

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I have two days left
Two days to fix what I've done
Two days to say goodbye
Two days to tell him
Two days to change what they think of me
Two days to prepare myself to spend time with my parents
Two days to love the time I spend with them, before I never see them again
Two days left
Two days... and only two
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Post by babiebunny64 Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:29 pm

awwww......that's kinda sweet!
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Post by Lollipopper Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:33 pm

It made me...sad! Did you do that, Miara?
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Post by Miara Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:49 pm

It was supposed to make you feel sad.
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Post by babiebunny64 Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:57 pm

hey when the poem says 2 days....does that mean that person's gonna kill themself or something?
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Post by Miara Mon Jun 07, 2010 8:49 am

No, it means I only have two days of school left.
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Post by babiebunny64 Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:01 pm

oh.....well now that i kno wat its about it doesnt seem all that sad
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Post by Lollipopper Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:40 pm

I know! I thought he was going to die or something...like the doctor told him he had a couple days to live.
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Post by babiebunny64 Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:28 pm

me too! but then that one line 'Two days to prepare myself to spend time with my parents' doesnt make it sound lik she or he was dying
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Post by Lollipopper Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:37 am

Yeah, that part was a little confusing.
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Post by babiebunny64 Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:41 am

i dont think i really understood that line when i read the whole poem first. i think i thought it said something lik...'two days to spend time with my family' without the 'prepare'
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