Where did all the adults go? ((RPG))

(should i write from the chris kid's POV?)

((that would be a good idea))

(yeah, proabaly better than being a vegtable, haha))
(Chris)
Whay did Lillian have to be so... self-sacrificing. Not that i wanted her brother to do, but i was pretty sure that we couldn't loose her,either. Plus, she was getting to be a really cool friend.

The lab was huge and confusing, but hopefully, i would be able to find the basic chamicals needed to breate the antidote...

someone poared something into my mouth, eventuly the pain began to lessen and I was able to move a little.

(C)
i somehow forgot what was needed. i ran back to the hospital room.
"can i see the bottle?" i asked, looking at the ingrediants, and remebering what the ratios were immedialty. I hurried back to thelab, and began to mix all the needed contents. the only probablem was that most of the ingrediants were out of the ingetive form, so i had to create a mixture that could go right into the bloodstream... i hoped that her dad would know how to do the IV,
(Lilly)
everything turned completely black and i began to se all my memories slowly scroll slowly before my eyes
(chris) by the time i had made it back, Mr.(our characters' dad) had set everything up except for the liquid...

((I thought I mentiond somewhere that their dad is a doctor))


after a few minuts I was blinking awake. I looked over at lillian, she did not look good. she had used her antidote on me. is there any way we can save her now?" I asked my dad.

(chris)
i ran in just as steven had finished asking a question. I rushed and hooked up the liquid to the system and let her dad insert the IV...

I watched as dad stuck an IV into lillian. she's going to hate that.. I thought.

(Did my character ever say anything about not liking needles, or do you infer that that my character would hate them because of me?)
Something stopped me from going furthur into the darkness and slowly pulled me back. THe sounds of machines reatched my ears... as did the sounds of my family's voices. I cracked my eyes open.
"hey," i said weakly.

"your awake!" I wanted to go over and give her a bg hug. But dad warned me that she was stll weak.

i laughed very quietly
"glad you'r awake, too," i said quietly "have we captured the bad guys?"

"I don't know, I just woke up a couple minuts ago"

I smiled and looked at dad
"Do we have everything fixed?"

"not yet" dad said. "steven is still hurting" he was right. I was awake. But I still felt a lot of pain.

I looked at Steven "Are you going to be okay?" I looked at Dad "You said that what he had was stronger than what i did and the antidote...?"

"the antidote we gave him will possibly exstend his life another four weeks." dad said. "he needs a second dose"

luckily i was able tocome up with a humorous response.
"What? you can't die!" i said to Steven, mimicing the tone of voice he had used not too long ago

I wasent able to laugh at the joke. I was leaned up against the wall pain throbbing everywhere. I glaced at her and managed a weak smile.

My attempt had obviously failed, i lost my whole attitude of trying to be happy,

"come on, the sooner we start looking the sooner we can find another antidote" dad said, helping me stand up.

"chris? is he done with taking care of the bad people?"

I saw some boy I did not know ((chris)) running back towards us. "is that chris?" I said weakly.

"yep," i said, "What's the scoop on the bad guys?"

I fucased on my breathing as they talked. at the moment I could not think too hard for very long.

The bad guys had been...taken care of. Those who were honest were freed. Chris seemed to take notice of Steven's breathing and rushed off to the lab to mix up a make-shift antidote,